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Re: Chapter Two
AN: Just a heads up, this chapter is going to take a different turn. If you're sensitive about couples, you might want to refrain. I still appreciate any and all ...
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Re: The "what if" game
What if someone tried to make a poisonous asparagus cookie?
Dec 3, 2008 -
Re: Romance Suggestions
I'm a big historical fiction fan, so I love all of Philippa Gregory's books. The Other Boleyn Girl is simply phenomenal. This book was amazing! I seriously recommend it also. ...
Dec 3, 2008 -
Re: That Voice
Wow, I really liked this! To be perfectly honest it reminded me of all the imaginary friends I had growing up, although I will admit that none of them could ...
Dec 3, 2008 -
Re: Shadow Box Prologue
Everyone else who reviewed already has pointed out everything I was going to, so my review will be rather short. I did like what I read, but I agree with ...
Dec 3, 2008 -
Re: The Place
It was definitely interesting. I've never read anything like it before. But, it was also very confusing. When you started out, it felt like there was a character and they ...
Dec 3, 2008 -
Re: Lois Lowry
I was just so shocked at how nonchalant Jonas' father was about the whole thing. But at the same time it makes him the perfect example of what the rest ...
Dec 3, 2008 -
Re: Chapter One
AN: Yes, another one. Just letting everyone know from here on out, these posts are going to be ridiculously long. Enjoy! Chapter One The sound from the alarm woke me ...
Nov 30, 2008 -
Re: Lois Lowry
The one book I have read by her, The Giver is amazing. It's a pretty short book, but it's also kind of odd. It took me a while to get ...
Nov 30, 2008 -
Re: Tamora Pierce
I have everything that Tamora Pierce has every written. I was even fortunate enough to meet her and get some of my books signed, but she hasn't been back to ...
Nov 30, 2008 -
Re: Introduction
I wanted to thank everyone for reviewing my Intro. Everyone has been a big help, so again, thank you. I did want to just let everyone know one more time ...
Nov 29, 2008 -
Re: Rain
I'm with Livin_Life_214-the flesh of a story is the description. While you shouldn't go overboard, you still want to give a clear picture on what's happening. Where are the characters, ...
Nov 25, 2008 -
Re: The Vampires Kiss (Chapter 1)
This might sound odd, but if I were in your shoes, I would try wooing your readers. Not in a Stephanie Meyer way, because to be frank her books gave ...
Nov 25, 2008 -
Re: He's not quite ready
It definitely was not bad for your first shot, not bad at all. Believe it or not, romantic scenes aren't the easiest thing to write. A lot is going on, ...
Nov 25, 2008 -
Re: The "what if" game
What if we had never started writing things down?
Nov 25, 2008
